Let's break down some persuasive elements in this email:As you've probably heard, there could be a wildcard in the race for the Democratic nomination.
We firmly believe that the candidate who has won the most pledged delegates -- the result of having more voters in more places supporting your campaign -- will be the Democratic nominee.
But to be safe, we are working to attract the support of "superdelegates" -- party officials and Democratic officeholders from across the country -- who also have a vote at the Democratic National Convention.
You may already know some superdelegates -- they include senators, governors, and even former presidents and vice presidents. But many others are ordinary people who hold positions in the state and local party operations.
These nearly 800 superdelegates will vote alongside the more than 3,000 pledged delegates who are chosen in the various state primaries and caucuses. The candidate that gets a majority of all delegates (superdelegates and pledged delegates combined) will be the Democratic nominee for president.
Right now, Barack is ahead in the contest for pledged delegates. We've won 23 contests out of the 35 that have been held so far -- including the last 8 in a row. And with our decisive victories in Virginia, Maryland, and Washington, DC on Tuesday, we now lead by more than 135 pledged delegates in the race for the Democratic nomination.
While we intend to continue winning states and expanding our lead among the pledged delegates, and believe that will likely ensure that Barack is the Democratic nominee, we're also doing the work of reaching out to superdelegates and making sure as many as possible support Barack Obama.
Here's where you can play a key role.
Our work so far has taught us one important lesson: that your personal story about why you support Barack Obama is often the most powerful persuasion tool for someone who's undecided. That's true whether that undecided voter is your neighbor or a superdelegate.
The story of where you're from, what brought you into the political process, the issues that matter to you, and why you became part of this movement has the potential to inspire someone who could cast a deciding vote in this contest.
Our staff will compile stories from supporters like you and make them a key part of the conversation with superdelegates as Barack asks for their support.
Share your story to help persuade superdelegates now:
http://my.barackobama.com/superdelegates
I've received a lot of email from folks asking how best to help with the superdelegate effort, and this is it.
Your note, combined with those of other Obama supporters, will tell the story of an extraordinary movement of ordinary people -- a story with a common thread of hope that becomes all the more powerful when it brings together the diverse backgrounds and experiences of our supporters.
Together we're building something historic, and your story can help make someone else a part of it.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Thank you,
David
David Plouffe
Campaign Manager
Obama for America
- The campaign first attracts the attention of the reader ("there could be a wildcard", located in the first line of the email). This is indented to scare the reader into believing that all his hard work could be overturned.
- After attracting the attention of the reader and informing the reader about the situation, the email contains a call to action ("Here's where you can play a key role")
- The call to action empowers the reader, making him or her feel important and needed ("your personal story about why you support Barack Obama is often the most powerful persuasion tool for someone who's undecided. That's true whether that undecided voter is your neighbor or a superdelegate.")
- Part of the entire Obama election strategy comes through in this email ("your personal story about why you support Barack Obama is often the most powerful persuasion tool"). Personal persuasion and narratives (not loads of facts and policies) change minds.
- The email ends with a simple call to action: go to a website (http://my.barackobama.com/superdelegates)
- The "share your story" website is simple and easy.
2 comments:
Interesting. I've read that the superdelegates are getting a lot of attention from both campaigns. This certainly won't make their lives any quieter.
I have read the same thing too. I saw an interview with a super delegate the other day and, despite being a younger guy, he talked about meeting Bill and Chelsea Clinton as well as Michelle Obama.
Here is another very interesting article--this one on trying to steal pledged delegates:
http://www.politico.com/news/stories/0208/8583.html
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